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''Silhouettes on the morning sunrise'',

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"Silhouettes on the morning sunrise",

      - 'A poetic, philosophical, story of nature's mystery's' 

Silhouettes on the morning sunrise, 
bringing forth a world of shadows and burning skies.
Revealing beauty being precisely dependent on 'your' views eye's,
leaving your soul oddly distant -  as 'if' it were breaking away from you.
Escaping along side the rest of the shadows,
nearly the only time they are able to play - 
- other 'than' the calming effect 'that is':
the sunset bringing to bed what is left of nature's breath.

Magic colliding with ghosts and shadows dancing with time,
so fantastic they ''have'' to 'be' spiritually aligned to make sense.
Can nature really be so pristine,
but only seen when exposed by a non earthly being? 

The sun's rays bringing forth something to behold...
Living proof of a profound truth untold;
a view that otherwise would have never been known.
Without the immortalized ghostly rays,
from the suns incredibly cleansing shower,
spraying over our humbling homes,
revealing that 'we' are exceptionally not alone.
Never gaze at the stars power,
before giving the suns rays, deserved thanks.

Illusive, beauticians, blossoming, consistent, and otherwise forgotten,
worth our respect and protection against our colonizing intentions. 
A broken dream weaving human invention worthy of a critical inspection.
Are you seeing the same sunshine, sunset, and sunrise; as I am describing through my dream - 
Our imagination combined with memories from lucky appearances from time to time - 
revealing young trees, fields with pollen and bees,
blessed of rolling grassy hills,
over the top orange reflections,
yellow perfectly settling and uncontested,
finishing off the rest with a small pinch of green ...
... plus one or two red and blue colors mixed in,
growing 'slowly' higher and creating vivid fire,
unveiling extended shadows by allowing them to be seen. 
It's pristine.

I am officially mentally exhausted,
by the beauty so persistent,
I can nearly feel the heat and wind washing away my sins,
as though I were I were standing directly in between what I actually seen,
and what I am currently dreaming.

What 'else is hidden' by heightened effects,
above and beyond our stars power'? 
Hidden by something we have 'no' control over;
Turning the skies into effectively fire.
So beautifully pristine,
that you cannot help but admire.
It makes you wonder.
Staring at the stars for hours,
Looking 'forever higher'.

"The skies are 'so' Inspired!"


Written By:

Matthew R Stephenson
Copyright 2014

Critique by iluvkitt3hs (Rated 'all' "5" subjects, 5.0/5.0)

"As always, beautiful".

"Eloquent and vivid, I can quite literally see the sunrise, and the shadows. I've never seen the dark places on earth as radiant as I have now. The imagery in this was absolutely incredible". 

"Never have I seen nature revered in such a way in a literary work; nothing has done it justice until now. You really captured the essence of nature; and with that life in general".

"Your formatting leaves little clues along the way as for how you intended the peace to be read, but you still left a lot of room for the reader's to put their own perspective on it".

"Great job!"
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As always, beautiful.

Eloquent and vivid, I can quite literally see the sunrise, and the shadows. I've never seen the dark places on earth as radiant as I have now. The imagery in this was absolutely incredible.

Never have I seen nature revered in such a way in a literary work; nothing has done it justice until now. You really captured the essence of nature; and with that life in general.

Your formatting leaves little clues along the way as for how you intended the peace to be read, but you still left a lot of room for the reader's to put their own perspective on it.

Great job!